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Are rats tired of running?
are they afraid of the traps filled with food they haven't had for awhile?
so do they starve on purpose?
why does their rib cage become sharp enough to punture
Anything still, moving?
and if they died would it be, silent?
why are rats classified as vermin?
As if we are any better
we create bombs to kill each other
and teach guns how to paint
before we learn how not to pull the trigger
and how children were forced to become the teacher
but are rats scared of dying
like humans are
.. or is it normal to them?
did they learn how not to care by a sucidal man
or are they just tiny foot prints stained on the pavement?
are they afraid of the traps filled with food they haven't had for awhile?
so do they starve on purpose?
why does their rib cage become sharp enough to punture
Anything still, moving?
and if they died would it be, silent?
why are rats classified as vermin?
As if we are any better
we create bombs to kill each other
and teach guns how to paint
before we learn how not to pull the trigger
and how children were forced to become the teacher
but are rats scared of dying
like humans are
.. or is it normal to them?
did they learn how not to care by a sucidal man
or are they just tiny foot prints stained on the pavement?
its for a contest i'm hoping to try out i hope its fun
please comment i would love advice
feel free to talk to me anytime
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please comment i would love advice
feel free to talk to me anytime
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Interesting questions. I especially like the end :
"did they learn how not to care by a sucidal man
or are they just tiny foot prints stained on the pavement?"
"did they learn how not to care by a sucidal man
or are they just tiny foot prints stained on the pavement?"